Dr. Lori E. Amy 
Department of Writing and Linguistics 
Georgia Southern University
   P.O. Box 8026
Statesboro, GA 30460
        (912) 681-0625/fax (912) 681-0739

1102  MW 1:00 - 1:50  Humanities 1002/ labs Fridays 12 - 2, Newton 2213
Lab Days: 8.31, 9.14 & 28, 10.12 & 26, 11.9 & 30
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Course Description
See The Department of Writing and Linguistics ENG1102 course overview.  In order to meet each of these important requirements, this course emphasizes the relationship between language and world.  We have two premises for this course: 1) we live in a world together, with other people with whom we need to communicate; & 2) our language attempts to understand and describe the world we live in and the relationships we form in this world.  At its most basic level, exploring the relationship between language and world asks: In its broader sense, exploring the relationship between language and world asks us to think about how the stories we tell ourselves -- stories about who we are, who "others" are, how we should live-- shape our vision of the world, and how these stories might be different than the identity stories other people tell themselves about the world.  What are the ways in which groups with different stories (explanatory or identity narratives) can come into conflict, and what are our possibilities for bridging the gaps between ourselves and others by finding points of commonality in our stories?  In order to fully explore this relation between language and world, we will have to pay careful attention to the forms and structures of language, so our class alternates between discussion of and workshopping with our texts (in this sense, your own writing is an important "text" for this class.)

What I Expect From You:


Writing Assignments All formal writing assignments will be revised several times before final grading; they must be submitted at the end of the term, with all  pre-writing and draft work, in your Writing PortfolioYour writing portfolio must contain your ongoing reading notebooks and writing issues checklists.  This is the place where you keep track of your writing progress. Workshops
You are all intelligent and already know how to use language. This class develops writing skills from what you already know about your world and using language.  We will be exploring how writing allows us to manipulate language, learn from our language, study and think and rethink our language use. As such, revision is a way of life in this class, and our workshops provide the opportunity to revise our writing.  At the end of each workshop you will complete a workshop summary assignment which will count towards your informal writing grade.

Readings/Texts

Syllabus
wk 1
8.22
Missed -- establishing late section of 1102
wk 2
lab Friday
8.27, 29, 31
Course overview:  computer discs, E-mail accounts
Assign: Truth and Reconciliation Commission web site
Discussion rules--  civility and procedures for group work and class discussion
Film viewing: Long Night's Journey into Day
Reading Notebook Entry #1 & Reading Notebook Entry #2
Discuss TRC site from RN entries
Reading Notebook Entries # 3 & 4
wk 3
9.5
Labor Day/off
Assign: 2- page response to Long Night's Journey into Day
Discuss: reading packet (about Long Night's Journey into Day) 
Workshop: Response paper
wk 4
lab Friday
9.10, 12, 14
Discuss:  Film and issues for response paper 
Tuesday, Sept. 11: World Trade Center and Pentagon attacked
Responding to September 11th
Research Links for September 11th: 1 & 2 & articles
Lab:-- classes from noon to 1 cancelled to observe national day of mourning.  Please be sure to enroll in Blackboard (directions for enrolling in Blackboard) if you have not already done so.
wk 5
9.17, 19
Finish Response Paper Workshop Monday; due by 2:00 Friday
Thesis & paragraph development, paraphrasing
Peer Review Worksheet
Portfolio Checklist
Review Final Projects and Readings for Term --  Critical Cultural Analysis of Identity stakes in the World Trade Center Bombing
Assign: Interview Paper
Workshop: Interview
wk 6
lab Friday
9.24, 26, 28
Return Response Paper; workshop issues & RN #5; Complete Writing Issues Checklist
Workshop: Interview Papers -- have papers in class!!  Also, print peer review and have this in class; complete RN # 6
Lab: First hour, review online links to World Trade Center background, politics, conflicts, issues;
audio file: background on WTC
The Christian Science Monitor, The Connection; Red Rock Eater Digest & Red Rock Eater Digest links & articles
2nd hour, work on papers, introduce Regents
wk 7
10.1, 3
DUE: Interview Papers
Begin: Regents Review -- Brainstorming and outlining from prompt,   TRC regents prompts
http://www.gsu.edu/~wwwrtp/ & Regents' Review Revision Exercise
wk 8
lab Friday
10. 8, 10, 12
Return Regents' Review: Holistoc Scoring, Regents Prep -- Practice Reading Test w/instructional feedback, Sample Reading Test
Essay #3: Revise one of the Regents practice tests into a formal essay for your portfolio
RN #7
RN #8
Final Project Options: Ethnographies, Civic Action Portfolio, etc.  Readings list, questions to answer, Proposal guidelines and time frame
Library Exercise and Final Project Reading
RN # 9
wk 9
10.15, 17
Research project descriptions, source report, issues and questions
Monday: Patrick, Shamoria, Lindsey, Fozia 
Wednesday: Bevin, Stan, Brad
RN #10
wk 10
lab Friday
10. 22, 24, 26
Monday: Robbie, Daniel, Kyle
Wednesday: Mya, Ralph
Lab: Research, group work and I'll assist
Due: Proposals
Last Regents' Prep -- individual by app't & at writing center
Regents Test
Last Regents' Prep
Regents Test
wk 11
10. 29, 31
Return Proposals-- in-class oral critique Monday and Wednesday
Check out the Journal of Contemporary Ethnography
wk 12
lab Friday
11.5, 7, 9
RN #11
Conference Instructions 

FIRST DRAFT CONFERENCES 11.7 - 11.12; second conferecnces 11.14 - 11.19; we'll set up dates at the end of our first conference meeting

  • Wednesday 11.7 conferences:
    • Patrick, Lindsey @ 1:00
    • Maya, Ralph @ 1:25
  • Friday 11.9 conferences
    • Daniel, Kyle, Brad @ 1:30
Drafting Final paper--  schedule writing center conferences 
Drafting Final paper--  schedule writing center conferences 
Lab on Friday: Bring discs, we'll be Getting materials online
wk 13 Bands report: 
  • Monday 11.12 Conferences:
    • Shamoria, Fozia, Stan @ 12:30
    • Rebecca, Robby, Bevin @ 1:10
  • Wednesday 11.14/ 2nd draft Conferences
    • Maya, Ralph 12:30
    • Stan 1:00
    • Robbie 1:30
    • Kyle 2:00
Defining writerly issues, beginning revision strategies
RN #12
wk 14
  • Monday 11.19/ 2nd draft Conferences
    • Shamoria, Fozia 12:30
    • Ralph 1:00
    • Rebecca 1:30
    • Bevin 2:00
Thanksgiving
wk15 11.26 -- arrange peer review for final project -- need drafts complete by end of week and I won't grade a project without the rough draft and peer review!!  I strongly encourage you to ALSO take your project to the writing center for a final draft conference:)
11.28 -- meet in Forrest Drive, writing center's computer lab; completing draft, making sure links work, etc.
11.30 -- lab-- very very important!!  You MUST BE IN CLASS FOR THIS-- we're transferring your final project to the web!!!  I'll also have a model portfolio for you to review; begin assembling portfolios -- see portfolio requirements
wk 16 RN #13
12.3 -- Final Exam prep, last project proof/tweaking
12.5 -- portfolio review, final exam prep
Portfolios Due Friday, December 7th
Final Exam: Wednesday, December 12, 12:30
Reading Notebook Entry # 1 & 2 -- After each day that we watch Long Night, discuss your emotional responses to the film.  What are you thinking/feeling as you watch this?
Reading Notebook Entry #3
Print a page from the TRC website ; explain why you chose this page to print-- how does it represent the meaning and significance of this site for you?  Complete a modified document analysis form for this page.
Reading Notebook Entry #4
Read several entries from the TRC Register of Reconciliation.  Relate what you read on the Register to what are watching in the film, Long Night's Journey into Day.
Reading Notebook Entry #5
1) Reread your paper, re-reading my comments as you go;
2) Summarize my commentary, and discuss those points that you think might be helpful to your revision as well as those points that you may not agree with me about or that you do not think you want to focus your revision energy on;
4) Explain how, after this exercise, you might revise your paper.
Reading Notebook Entry #6
Think about the groups to which you belong.  These could be family groups, religious groups, social or political groups.  Gender and race can also function as identity groups, as can ethnicity, nationality, and geographical regions.  For example, "southerners" in the United States tend to form an identity group that is distinct from "northerners."  Similarly, sports fans that affiliate their identities with particular teams-- "Gator fans" or "Bulldog" fans, for example-- constitute identity groups. Free-write a bit about the identity groups to which you belong.  How does your affiliation with these groups shape your thinking, form your Relationships, or direct your use of your time (for example, do you go to meetings? watch events?  Hang out with your group members?)
Reading Notebook Entry #7
After completing your interview paper, reflect on the differences between the social and cultural forces shaping your identity structures and those shaping the person you interviewed.  What are the differences in perceptions/identifications between you, and how do you account for these?  If you find yourself with a good deal in common, why do you think this is?
Reading Notebook Entry #8
Now that you have completed the Regents Practice from the TRC documentary prompts that I designed, do you see ways to refine the thesis in your response papers?  What are the most difficult aspects of revising your response papers?  What is helping you most?  What is most confusing/frustrating to you?

Reading Notebook Entry #10
Free-write about your project plans--  what is your focus?  What questions have you posed for your research?  How are you analyzing the cultural violences implied in your project?  What help have your group members been?  What help do you need from me?  Are you ready to write your proposal?  Is there anything about this project that you don't yet understand?

Reading Notebook Entry #11
What progress have you made revising your first two essays (the Response Paper and the Interview Paper)?  E-mail this notebook entry to me; I will reply to this mail, and you must print out the full text of your message and my reply to include in your Reading Notebook submissions at the end of the semester.

Reading Notebook Entry #12
Progress Report-- what have you so far accomplished for your final project?  What do you still need to do?  E-mail this notebook entry to me; I will reply to this mail, and you must print out the full text of your message and my reply to include in your Reading Notebook submissions at the end of the semester.

Reading Notebook Entry #13

Essay #3
Choose one of the Regents Practice Tests that we did and revise one of these into a formal writing for your portfolio.  This assignment serves two purposes:

  1. GOOD writing requires revision, and we can consider the Regents' practice essays we wrote in class as first drafts for a formal writing assignment-- use my commentary to revise these drafts into a formal essay with a clear thesis statement, clear topic sentences for each paragraph, specific details/examples that support your topic, etc.;
  2. I don't want the Regents' Practice to be dead time in our class, so the prompts you practiced from are samples of possible thesis questions from the TRC documentary from which you wrote your response paper; practice writing from these prompts reinforces your revision work for your response papers
Conference Instructions
We need to conference your final projects twice before Thanksgiving.  At the first conference, you need at least this: At the second draft conference, you need at least this: Reading Notebook #13
Writing Log #10 is your last entry-- remember, the writing logs must be in your revision notebook with all of the work for this class-- they are 10% of your grade!
This log is intended to help you organize your revision notebook, to jump-start your final editing/revision for your final project, and to prepare you for the final exam.  In short, this is what you do:
  1. Review each of the writing assignments we have done for this class.  Make sure you have all of your paperwork together.  Beginning with the summary paper and working all the way through the final project, review your first drafts, the comments from you peer review, my critique on the paper you submitted for my evaluation, my notes on the writing issues check list I returned with your paper.  Make a list of each of the writing issues identified for your paper, when and how your worked on the issue, what you learned (i.e., what actually helped you understand the writing problem... a conference? reviewing your handbook?  using online resources?), and when you revised
  2. From your lists, format a readable and clear chart for me.
  3. Write a paragraph explaining how well you think you revised each paper, what your best work is and why, and what was most help in your writing and revision process.  Assess yourself as a writer-- where do you think you are and what do you still have left to do.
  4. Tell me what grade level you think your final project is at and why.
Example:    Reading Notebook # 13 / Writing Progress/Revision Summary
 
Paper
Writing issues
Revision/writing work
Revised
Response Paper
 
 

Response/ revised paper

s/v/o logic
purpose/thesis statement
 

wordy sentences

9.15 conference Dr. Amy -- helped
9.15 conference Dr. Amy -- helped
 

9.27 writing center -- helped

9.24
 
 

9.29 Final paper

Interview paper list writing issues dates worked on/how/help or not when revised
Regents Practice "   "  "          " "         "
Final Project just as for the other papers, define the writing issues that you worked on-- when, where, and how your worked on these-- and what strategies helped you and when you had your final paper read to include in your revision notebook

Paragraph expaling how well you rvised each paper, best work and why, what strategies you learned most from, final project assessment
 

What grade level do you think your final project is at?