Dr. Lori E. Amy 
Department of Writing and Linguistics 
Georgia Southern University
   P.O. Box 8026
Statesboro, GA 30460
        (912) 681-0625/fax (912) 681-0739

1101 W  MW 8:00 - 9:15  Newton 2211 Blackboard Course Site
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Course Description
See The Department of Writing and Linguistics ENG1101 course overview.  In order to meet each of these important requirements, this course emphasizes the relationship between language and world.  We have two premises for this course: 1) we live in a world together, with other people with whom we need to communicate; & 2) our language attempts to understand and describe the world we live in and the relationships we form in this world.  At its most basic level, exploring the relationship between language and world asks: In its broader sense, exploring the relationship between language and world asks us to think about how the stories we tell ourselves -- stories about who we are, who "others" are, how we should live-- shape our vision of the world, and how these stories might be different than the identity stories other people tell themselves about the world.  What are the ways in which groups with different stories (explanatory or identity narratives) can come into conflict, and what are our possibilities for bridging the gaps between ourselves and others by finding points of commonality in our stories?  In order to fully explore this relation between language and world, we will have to pay careful attention to the forms and structures of language, so our class alternates between discussion of and workshopping with our texts (in this sense, your own writing is an important "text" for this class.)

What I Expect From You:


Writing Assignments All formal writing assignments will be revised several times before final grading; they must be submitted at the end of the term, with all  pre-writing and draft work, in yourRevision Notebook.  Your revision notebook must contain your ongoing writing log.  This is the place where you keep track of your writing progress. Workshops
You are all intelligent and already know how to use language. This class develops writing skills from what you already know about your world and using language.  We will be exploring how writing allows us to manipulate language, learn from our language, study and think and rethink our language use. As such, revision is a way of life in this class, and our workshops provide the opportunity to revise our writing.  At the end of each workshop you will complete a workshop summary assignment which will count towards your informal writing grade.

Readings/Texts

Syllabus
wk 1
8.21
Course overview:  computer discs, E-mail accounts, Blackboard
Assign: Truth and Reconciliation Commission web site
Discussion rules--  civility and procedures for group work and posting to Bulletin Board
wk 2
8.27
Film viewing: Long Night's Journey into Day
Reading Notebook Entry #1 & Reading Notebook Entry #2
Discuss TRC site from RN entries
Reading Notebook Entries # 3 & 4
wk 3
9.3
Labor Day/off
Partner responses: Reading Notebook Entry #5 (post to Blackboard)--  post in class
Assign: 2- page response to Long Night's Journey into Day
Discuss: reading packet (about Long Night's Journey into Day) & questions from Blackboard
wk 4
9.10
Discussion: Restorative v. Retributive Justice, processes of othering and cycles of violence 
Tuesday, September 11th:  Attack on World Trade Center and Pentagon
Wesdnesday, September 11th: Discussion of implications of attack
Responding to September 11th
Research Links for September 11th: 1 & 2
wk 5
9.17
Monday: Workshop Response Papers (due Friday by 2:00)
Thesis & paragraph development, paraphrasing
Peer Review Worksheet
Portfolio Checklist
Assign: Writing as Reflective Action pp 149-152/Constructing Identities & RN #6
Wednesday: Discuss: WRA
Assign: Summary & Summary work-up;  Choose 1 reading from Chapter 2 and write a summary for this reading
wk 6
9.24
Workshop Summaries (Due Monday between Wed. Oct 10th and Friday Oct 12th)
RN # 7
wk 7
10.1
NOTE: Now that you have drafted your summary papers, put these aside and concentrate on revising your response papers.  After you have completed the writing issues checklikst and Reading Notebook #8, you will see  your summary papers differently and have a better revision plan.  Turn back to the summaries this weekend, after we have spent this week in class working with the Response paper revisions. 
Return Response Papers; workshop writing issues from response papers, revisions strategies for summaries 
LOC Workshop & class revisionsn for LOC workshop
RN # 8
Writing Issues Checklist
Assign: WRA pp 261-263 & 316-324
Discuss: WRA readings; critical analysis and rhetorical strategies
10.3 -- last day to w/draw w/out academic penalty
wk 8
10.8
Summaries Due-- Turn in between Wednesday and Friday, 10.10 - 10.12.  DON'T FORGET THE PEER REVIEW AND RN #7!!
--- introduce final project: Notes from Williams' Reading
Final Project: Language and World
RN # 9
wk 9
10.15
Workshop: Final paper options 
10.19 -- Homecoming
wk 10
10.22
PROPOSAL WORKSHOP
wk 11
10.29
proposals due!!!
Workshop summary papers... complete writing issues checklist
Paper Map/ revision workshops
Example of mapped paper
Reading Notebook #10 Library Exercise-- complete with group members
schedule conferences with me for next week Monday and Wednesday (meet with group members in my office)
wk 12
11.5
Conferences... you get your final project proposals back at our conference.  BRING COMPLETED PAPER MAPS TO CONFERENCE WITH YOU!!!
 
Monday
8:00 p.m.  Miki & Aji
8:20 p.m.  Jonathan & Carnella
8:40 p.m.  Dwan & Christina
9:00 p.m.  Christopher & Julia
Wednesday
3:00 p.m.  Rachel & Penny
8:00 p.m.  Sarah & Faye
8:20 p.m.  Lindsey & Darcie
9:00 p.m.  Elizabeth & Mario
wk 13
11.12
Creating web pages, using Composer, sketching sites
RN # 11
wk 14
11.19
Drafts should be completed.. begin composing links/files, start revision and editing.  Schedule draft conferences with me and at writing center
Thanksgiving
wk15
11.26
Draft conferences, develop web sites
Portfolio Checklist
RN #12
wk 16
12.3
RN #13
Final exam prep
Portfolios Due Friday, December 7th
Final Exam: Wednesday, December 12th, 5:30 p.m.
Reading Notebook Entry # 1 & 2 -- After each day that we watch Long Night, discuss your emotional responses to the film.  What are you thinking/feeling as you watch this?
Reading Notebook Entry #3
Print a page from the TRC website ; explain why you chose this page to print-- how does it represent the meaning and significance of this site for you?  Complete a modified document analysis form for this page.
Reading Notebook Entry #4
Read several entries from the TRC Register of Reconciliation.  Relate what you read on the Register to what are watching in the film, Long Night's Journey into Day.
Reading Notebook Entry #5
This notebook is a peer-exercise designed to help you check your perceptions of the film, Long Nights' Journey Into Day, against the perceptions of your classmates.  It is also designed as pre-writing for your response paper.  For the first part of this Notebook entry,
  1. Take 2-3 minutes to freewrite about what you think is the most important scene in the film; describe the scene and then interpret it (i.e., what do you think this scene means, what does it say about the TRC and its work?)
  2. Exchange this freewrite with your partner; read each other's freewrites and use them to discuss your reactions to the film.  Follow the rules of civility we have laid down for public discussion : =)
  3. After reading your partner's freewrite, log into Blackboard and post to the discussion board a brief (paragraph or so) comparison of the differences or similarities between the way in which you responded to the film and the way in which you perceive your partner to have responded.
  4. Label your Freewrite RN #5, part 1 and keep this to turn in at the end of the semester with your entire Reading Notebook, which is 20% of your grade.
  5. Label the Discussion Board Posting RN #5 part 2 -- print this and keep it in your notebook with part 1 of RN #5
After doing this preliminary work, work either individually or with a partner to develop a writing plan for your Response paper.  The third part of Reading Notebook #5 is the pre-writing/planning work for your paper, label this work RN #5 and complete these steps:
  1. From your Reading Notebooks #1- 5, choose what you think is the most important issue/idea/ topic from Long Night's Journey.
  2. Briefly describe one or two scenes from the film that make the point you want to develop in your Response Paper.
  3. Think through your position -- "position" here means your stance, the point that you are making about this film -- and write one or two lines about how others might see this point/issue differently.
  4. Brainstorm this topic... what must you say in order to persuade or inform your readers?
  5. Develop a thesis statement that sums up each of the ideas/issues you have so far noted.

  6. Order the points in your brainstorm-- what must you discuss first, second, third, and so on?
Reading Notebook Entry #6
Think about the groups to which you belong.  These could be family groups, religious groups, social or political groups.  Gender and race can also function as identity groups, as can ethnicity, nationality, andgeographical regions.  For example, "southerners" in the United States tend to form an identity group that is distinct from "northerners." Similarly, sports fans that affiliate their identities with particular teams-- "Gator fans" or "Bulldog" fans, for example-- constitute identitygroups. Free-write a bit about the identity groups to which you belong.How does your affiliation with these groups shape your thinking, form yourrelationships, or direct your use of your time (for example, do you go to meetings? watch events?  Hang out with your group members?)

Reading Notebook Entry #7
Review today's workshop paper and decide:

  1. Does this paper have good points but need more proof (concrete detail)?  Good detail but needs to draw more conclusions?
  2. What is the thesis?  Does is specifically define what the paper will be talking about?  Can we improve the thesis in any way?

  3. Organization: The thesis paragraph needs to lay out the major points the paper will make, and the paper needs to make those points in the order in which they are described in the thesis paragraph.  Each paragraph needs a good topic sentence that specifically defines the thesis point the paragraph is explaining, and every sentence in the paragraph needs to directly develop the topic sentence
Reading Notebook Entry #8
1) Reread your paper & Carefully read my comments on your paper
2) Summarize my commentary, and discuss those points that you think might be helpful to your revision as well as those points that you may not agree with me about or that you do not think you want to focus your revision energy on;
3) Explain your emotional response to my commentary --- is my evaluation what you expected, and how do you feel about it?
4) Does my commentary make sense?  Do you see ways to revise your paper?

Reading Notebook Entry #9
After reviewing the final project explanation, brainstorm possible identity narratives that you might want to explore.  What function do these narratives serve?  Is there a difference between the narrative "lived reality."  Does the narrative mask or enable something in our culture?  What are the ways in which this narrative might speak of epistemic violence?

Reading Notebook Entry #11
E-mail me an progress report for your final project.  What have you completed so far?  What do you have left?  What help do you still need?  What is your revision plan?  Label this email subject heading "RN #11: I will reply to this email, and you must print my reply, with your original text, out and include it in your RN submissions when you turn the portfolio in at the end of the semester.

Reading Notebook Entry #12
In a very brief paragraph, explain the identity narrative you are analzying for your final project, the problem with the narrative (i.e., the cultural violence associated with the narrative), and the counter-narrative you propose (i.e., how would you revise the narrative, or tell the story differently)

Reading Notebook #13
This is your last entry.  This log is intended to help you organize your revision notebook, to jump-start your final editing/revision for your final project, and to prepare you for the final exam.  In short, this is what you do:

  1. Review each of the writing assignments we have done for this class.  Make sure you have all of your paperwork together.  Beginning with the summary paper and working all the way through the final project, review your first drafts, the comments from you peer review, my critique on the paper you submitted for my evaluation, my notes on the writing issues check list I returned with your paper.  Make a list of each of the writing issues identified for your paper, when and how your worked on the issue, what you learned (i.e., what actually helped you understand the writing problem... a conference? reviewing your handbook?  using online resources?), and when you revised
  2. From your lists, format a readable and clear chart for me.
  3. Write a paragraph explaining how well you think you revised each paper, what your best work is and why, and what was most help in your writing and revision process.  Assess yourself as a writer-- where do you think you are and what do you still have left to do.
  4. Tell me what grade level you think your final project is at and why.
Example:    Reading Notebook # 13 / Writing Progress/Revision Summary
 
Paper
Writing issues
Revision/writing work
Revised
Response Paper
 
 

Response/ revised paper

s/v/o logic
purpose/thesis statement
 

wordy sentences

9.15 conference Dr. Amy -- helped
9.15 conference Dr. Amy -- helped
 

9.27 writing center -- helped

9.24
 
 

9.29 Final paper

Summary paper list writing issues dates worked on/how/help or not when revised
Final Project just as for the other papers, define the writing issues that you worked on-- when, where, and how your worked on these-- and what strategies helped you and when you had your final paper read to include in your revision notebook

Paragraph expaling how well you revised each paper, best work and why, what strategies you learned most from, final project assessment
 

What grade level do you think your final project is at?
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

-------------------------------------------------------------- notes/under revision

Writing Log #5
Writing Log #10
Writing Log #10 is your last entry-- remember, the writing logs must be in your revision notebook with all of the work for this class-- they are 10% of your grade!
This log is intended to help you organize your revision notebook, to jump-start your final editing/revision for your final project, and to prepare you for the final exam.  In short, this is what you do:

  1. Review each of the writing assignments we have done for this class.  Make sure you have all of your paperwork together.  Beginning with the summary paper and working all the way through the final project, review your first drafts, the comments from you peer review, my critique on the paper you submitted for my evaluation, my notes on the writing issues check list I returned with your paper.  Make a list of each of the writing issues identified for your paper, when and how your worked on the issue, what you learned (i.e., what actually helped you understand the writing problem... a conference? reviewing your handbook?  using online resources?), and when you revised
  2. From your lists, format a readable and clear chart for me.
  3. Write a paragraph explaining how well you think you revised each paper, what your best work is and why, and what was most help in your writing and revision process.  Assess yourself as a writer-- where do you think you are and what do you still have left to do.
  4. Tell me what grade level you think your final project is at and why.
Example:
      Writing Log # 10 Date Writing Progress/Revision Summary
Paper
Writing issues
Revision/writing work
Revised
Summary paper
 
 

Summary/ revised paper

s/v/o logic
purpose/thesis statement
 

wordy sentences

9.15 conference Dr. Amy -- helped
9.15 conference Dr. Amy -- helped
 

9.27 writing center -- helped

9.24
 
 

9.29 Final paper

Group Language/world  list writing issues dates worked on/how/help or not when revised
Film Review "   "  "          " "         "
Final Project just as for the other papers, define the writing issues that you worked on-- when, where, and how your worked on these-- and what strategies helped you and when you had your final paper read to include in your revision notebook
Paragraph expaling how well you rvised each paper, best work and why, what strategies you learned most from, final project assessment
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

What grade level do you think your final project is
at?