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Course
Description
See The Department of Writing and Linguistics
ENG1101
course overview. In order to meet each of these important requirements,
this course emphasizes the relationship between language and world.
We have two premises for this course: 1) we live in a world together, with
other people with whom we need to communicate; & 2) our language attempts
to understand and describe the world we live in and the relationships we
form in this world. At its most basic level, exploring the relationship
between language and world asks:
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What are the different expectations and interpretations
that different audiences might have of a text?
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How can a writer imagine an audience?
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What kinds of information about the "world"
must we have in order to imagine diverse audiences and their probable reading/interpretative
strategies?
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What are the risks of imagining audience (or:
what kinds of stereotypes and assumptions do we carry about groups of people
on which we might base our assumptions of audience?).
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How can we increase our awareness of different
reading/interpretative groups (audiences) and their different knowledges
and perceptions?
In its broader sense, exploring the relationship
between language and world asks us to think about how the stories we tell
ourselves -- stories about who we are, who "others" are, how we should
live-- shape our vision of the world, and how these stories might be different
than the identity stories other people tell themselves about the world.
What are the ways in which groups with different stories (explanatory or
identity narratives) can come into conflict, and what are our possibilities
for bridging the gaps between ourselves and others by finding points of
commonality in our stories? In order to fully explore this relation
between language and world, we will have to pay careful attention to the
forms and structures of language, so our class alternates between discussion
of and workshopping with our texts (in this sense, your own writing is
an important "text" for this class.)
What I Expect
From You:
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An extensive writing log/journal that records
the writing issues we define in class, your progress and process as a writer,
your strengths and weaknesses and strategies for meeting the writing requirements
of the class.
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Active participation in class discussion.
(This includes E-mail responses to the class list with ideas, thoughts,
questions, emotions about the writing issues raised from our readings.)
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4 short (2-3 pages) and one long (6-8 pages)
formal papers. These assignments will be determined partly by the context
of class reading/thinking; in this sense, the class's responses to and
evaluations of the readings are as important as the reading itself.
Our discussion is, in fact, an important "text" of the class! In part,
I will direct these writings so that they form an assignment sequence designed
to help you progressively develop your writing voice, awareness of your
own process as a writer, your analytical
and argumentative skills.
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A final exam that defines your progress as
a writer
Writing
Assignments
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We will be doing a great deal of writing for
this class. Our informal writing, such
as class E-mail, postings to the class Forum, and the Writing Workshop
Wrap-ups, count as 20% of the course grade.
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The bulk of the course grade, 70%, will be
determined by the formal writing assignments.
Thus, the grade breakdown is as follows:
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20% -- Informal Writing (including discussion
board postings, e-mail, quizzes, and workshops)
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10% -- Final Exam
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70% -- Formal Writing Assignments
All formal writing assignments
will
be revised several times before
final grading; they must be submitted at the end of the term, with
all pre-writing and draft work, in yourRevision
Notebook. Your revision notebook must contain your ongoing
writing
log. This is the place where you keep track
of your writing progress.
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As you keep your writing
log, pay attention to how your writing is changing, how you as a writer
are evolving.
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Towards the middle of
the semester, you should find that you are making fewer of the errors that
you were making at the beginning of the term.
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Your final
exam will be an essay evaluating
your progress as a writer throughout the semester;
this essay must cite specific writing issues on which you have worked,
how you addressed them, and what kinds of issues you still have left to
address.
Workshops
You are all intelligent and already know
how to use language. This class develops writing skills from what you already
know about your world and using language. We will be exploring how
writing allows us to manipulate language, learn from our language, study
and think and rethink our language use. As such, revision is a way of life
in this class, and our workshops provide the opportunity to revise our
writing. At the end of each workshop you will complete a workshop
summary assignment which will count towards your informal writing grade.
Readings/Texts
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Our readings for this class are divided between
the articles in the course packet, which you get from me, Internet readings,
and and excerpts from Carter and Gradin's Writing as Reflective Action.
It is important that you keep up with the readings and complete each day's
quiz/writing log assignments for the readings.
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You will also need the Blair Handbook; a good
portion of our work will use the support web site for this handbook at
http://cw.prenhall.com/bookbind/public_html/pubbooks/fulwiler/-
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You will need a college level dictionary;
I also have handbooks and dictionaries available online at http://www2.gasou.edu:80/facstaff/lamy/tools.html.
Syllabus
wk 1
8.21 |
Course
overview: computer discs, E-mail accounts, Blackboard
Assign: Truth
and Reconciliation Commission web site
Discussion rules--
civility and procedures for group work and posting to Bulletin Board |
wk 2
8.27 |
Film viewing:
Long Night's Journey into Day
Reading Notebook
Entry #1 & Reading Notebook Entry
#2
Discuss TRC
site from RN entries
Reading Notebook
Entries # 3 & 4 |
wk 3
9.3 |
Labor Day/off
Partner responses: Reading
Notebook Entry #5 (post to Blackboard)--
post in class
Assign: 2-
page response to Long Night's Journey into Day
Discuss:
reading packet (about Long Night's Journey into Day) & questions
from Blackboard |
wk 4
9.10 |
Discussion:
Restorative v. Retributive Justice, processes of othering and cycles of
violence
Tuesday, September 11th: Attack
on World Trade Center and Pentagon
Wesdnesday, September 11th: Discussion
of implications of attack
Responding
to September 11th
Research Links for September 11th: 1
& 2 |
wk 5
9.17 |
Monday: Workshop
Response
Papers (due Friday by 2:00)
Thesis
& paragraph development, paraphrasing
Peer
Review Worksheet
Portfolio
Checklist
Assign: Writing
as Reflective Action pp 149-152/Constructing Identities & RN
#6
Wednesday: Discuss:
WRA
Assign: Summary
& Summary
work-up; Choose 1 reading from Chapter 2 and write a summary
for this reading |
wk 6
9.24 |
Workshop Summaries
(Due
Monday between Wed. Oct 10th and Friday Oct 12th)
RN
# 7 |
wk 7
10.1 |
NOTE:
Now
that you have drafted your summary papers, put these aside and concentrate
on revising your response papers. After you have completed the writing
issues checklikst and Reading Notebook #8, you will see your summary
papers differently and have a better revision plan. Turn back to
the summaries this weekend, after we have spent this week in class working
with the Response paper revisions.
Return Response
Papers; workshop writing issues from response
papers, revisions strategies for summaries
LOC
Workshop & class
revisionsn for LOC workshop
RN
# 8
Writing
Issues Checklist
Assign: WRA
pp 261-263 & 316-324
Discuss: WRA
readings; critical analysis and rhetorical strategies
10.3 -- last day
to w/draw w/out academic penalty |
wk 8
10.8 |
Summaries Due--
Turn
in between Wednesday and Friday, 10.10 - 10.12. DON'T
FORGET THE PEER REVIEW AND RN #7!!
--- introduce final
project: Notes
from Williams' Reading
Final
Project: Language and World
RN # 9 |
wk 9
10.15 |
Workshop:
Final paper options
10.19 -- Homecoming |
wk 10
10.22 |
PROPOSAL
WORKSHOP |
wk 11
10.29 |
proposals due!!!
Workshop summary
papers... complete writing
issues checklist
Paper
Map/ revision workshops
Example
of mapped paper
Reading
Notebook #10 Library Exercise-- complete with group members
schedule conferences with me for next
week Monday and Wednesday (meet with group members in my office) |
wk 12
11.5 |
Conferences... you get your final project
proposals back at our conference. BRING COMPLETED PAPER MAPS TO
CONFERENCE WITH YOU!!!
Monday
8:00 p.m. Miki & Aji
8:20 p.m. Jonathan & Carnella
8:40 p.m. Dwan & Christina
9:00 p.m. Christopher & Julia |
Wednesday
3:00 p.m. Rachel & Penny
8:00 p.m. Sarah & Faye
8:20 p.m. Lindsey & Darcie
9:00 p.m. Elizabeth & Mario |
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wk 13
11.12 |
Creating
web pages, using Composer, sketching sites
RN # 11 |
wk 14
11.19 |
Drafts should be completed.. begin composing
links/files, start revision and editing. Schedule draft conferences
with me and at writing center
Thanksgiving |
wk15
11.26 |
Draft conferences,
develop web sites
Portfolio
Checklist
RN #12 |
wk 16
12.3 |
RN #13
Final
exam prep
Portfolios Due Friday,
December 7th |
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Final Exam: Wednesday, December 12th, 5:30 p.m.
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Reading Notebook Entry
# 1 & 2 -- After each day that we watch Long Night, discuss
your emotional responses to the film. What are you thinking/feeling
as you watch this?
Reading Notebook
Entry #3
Print a page from the TRC
website ; explain why you chose this page to print-- how does it represent
the meaning and significance of this site for you? Complete a modified
document
analysis form for this page.
Reading Notebook
Entry #4
Read several entries from the TRC
Register of Reconciliation. Relate what you read on the Register
to what are watching in the film, Long Night's Journey into Day.
Reading Notebook
Entry #5
This notebook is a peer-exercise designed
to help you check your perceptions of the film, Long Nights' Journey
Into Day, against the perceptions of your classmates. It is also
designed as pre-writing for your response paper. For the first part
of this Notebook entry,
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Take 2-3 minutes to freewrite about what you
think is the most important scene in the film; describe the scene and then
interpret it (i.e., what do you think this scene means, what does it say
about the TRC and its work?)
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Exchange this freewrite with your partner;
read each other's freewrites and use them to discuss your reactions to
the film. Follow the rules of civility we have laid down for public
discussion : =)
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After reading your partner's freewrite, log
into Blackboard and post to the discussion board a brief (paragraph or
so) comparison of the differences or similarities between the way in which
you responded to the film and the way in which you perceive your partner
to have responded.
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Label your Freewrite RN #5, part 1 and keep
this to turn in at the end of the semester with your entire Reading Notebook,
which is 20% of your grade.
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Label the Discussion Board Posting RN #5 part
2 -- print this and keep it in your notebook with part 1 of RN #5
After doing this preliminary work, work either
individually or with a partner to develop a writing plan for your Response
paper. The third part of Reading Notebook #5 is the pre-writing/planning
work for your paper, label this work RN #5 and complete these steps:
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From your Reading Notebooks #1- 5, choose
what you think is the most important issue/idea/ topic from Long Night's
Journey.
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Briefly describe one or two scenes from the
film that make the point you want to develop in your Response Paper.
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Think through your position -- "position"
here means your stance, the point that you are making about this film --
and write one or two lines about how others might see this point/issue
differently.
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Brainstorm this topic... what must you say
in order to persuade or inform your readers?
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Develop a thesis statement that sums up each
of the ideas/issues you have so far noted.
Order the points in your brainstorm--
what must you discuss first, second, third, and so on?
Reading Notebook Entry
#6
Think about the groups to which you belong.
These could be family groups, religious
groups, social or political groups. Gender and race can also
function as identity groups, as can ethnicity, nationality, andgeographical
regions. For example, "southerners" in the United States tend
to form an identity group that is distinct from "northerners." Similarly,
sports fans that affiliate their identities with particular teams--
"Gator fans" or "Bulldog" fans, for example-- constitute identitygroups.
Free-write a bit about the identity groups to which you belong.How does
your affiliation with these groups shape your thinking, form yourrelationships,
or direct your use of your time (for example, do you go to meetings?
watch events? Hang out with your group members?)
Reading Notebook Entry
#7
Review today's workshop paper and decide:
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Does this paper have good points but need
more proof (concrete detail)? Good detail but needs to draw more
conclusions?
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What is the thesis? Does is specifically
define what the paper will be talking about? Can we improve the thesis
in any way?
Organization: The thesis paragraph needs
to lay out the major points the paper will make, and the paper needs to
make those points in the order in which they are described in the thesis
paragraph. Each paragraph needs a good topic sentence that specifically
defines the thesis point the paragraph is explaining, and every sentence
in the paragraph needs to directly develop the topic sentence
Reading
Notebook Entry #8
1) Reread your paper & Carefully read
my comments on your paper
2) Summarize my commentary, and discuss
those points that you think might be helpful to your revision as well as
those points that you may not agree with me about or that you do not think
you want to focus your revision energy on;
3) Explain your emotional response to
my commentary --- is my evaluation what you expected, and how do you feel
about it?
4) Does my commentary make sense?
Do you see ways to revise your paper?
Reading Notebook Entry
#9
After reviewing the final project explanation,
brainstorm possible identity narratives that you might want to explore.
What function do these narratives serve? Is there a difference between
the narrative "lived reality." Does the narrative mask or enable
something in our culture? What are the ways in which this narrative
might speak of epistemic violence?
Reading Notebook
Entry #11
E-mail me an progress report for your
final project. What have you completed so far? What do you
have left? What help do you still need? What is your revision
plan? Label this email subject heading "RN #11: I will reply to this
email, and you must print my reply, with your original text, out and include
it in your RN submissions when you turn the portfolio in at the end of
the semester.
Reading Notebook
Entry #12
In a very brief paragraph, explain the
identity narrative you are analzying for your final project, the problem
with the narrative (i.e., the cultural violence associated with the narrative),
and the counter-narrative you propose (i.e., how would you revise the narrative,
or tell the story differently)
Reading Notebook
#13
This is your last entry. This log
is intended to help you organize your revision notebook, to jump-start
your final editing/revision for your final project, and to prepare you
for the final exam. In short, this is what you do:
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Review each of the writing assignments we
have done for this class. Make sure you have all of your paperwork
together. Beginning with the summary paper and working all the way
through the final project, review your first drafts, the comments from
you peer review, my critique on the paper you submitted for my evaluation,
my notes on the writing issues check list I returned with your paper.
Make a list of each of the writing issues identified for your paper, when
and how your worked on the issue, what you learned (i.e., what actually
helped you understand the writing problem... a conference? reviewing your
handbook? using online resources?), and when you revised
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From your lists, format a readable and clear
chart for me.
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Write a paragraph explaining how well you
think you revised each paper, what your best work is and why, and what
was most help in your writing and revision process. Assess yourself
as a writer-- where do you think you are and what do you still have left
to do.
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Tell me what grade level you think your final
project is at and why.
Example: Reading Notebook
# 13 / Writing Progress/Revision Summary
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Paper
|
Writing issues
|
Revision/writing work
|
Revised
|
Response Paper
Response/ revised paper |
s/v/o logic
purpose/thesis statement
wordy sentences |
9.15 conference Dr. Amy -- helped
9.15 conference Dr. Amy -- helped
9.27 writing center -- helped |
9.24
9.29 Final paper |
| Summary paper |
list writing issues |
dates worked on/how/help or not |
when revised |
| Final Project |
just as for the other papers, define the
writing issues that you worked on-- |
when, where, and how your worked on these--
and what strategies helped you |
and when you had your final paper read
to include in your revision notebook |
Paragraph expaling how well you revised
each paper, best work and why, what strategies you learned most from, final
project assessment
What grade level do you think your final
project is at?
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notes/under revision
Writing Log
#5
Writing
Log #10
Writing Log #10 is your last entry-- remember,
the writing logs must be in your revision notebook with all of the work
for this class-- they are 10% of your grade!
This log is intended to help you organize
your revision notebook, to jump-start your final editing/revision for your
final project, and to prepare you for the final exam. In short, this
is what you do:
-
Review each of the writing assignments we
have done for this class. Make sure you have all of your paperwork
together. Beginning with the summary paper and working all the way
through the final project, review your first drafts, the comments from
you peer review, my critique on the paper you submitted for my evaluation,
my notes on the writing issues check list I returned with your paper.
Make a list of each of the writing issues identified for your paper, when
and how your worked on the issue, what you learned (i.e., what actually
helped you understand the writing problem... a conference? reviewing your
handbook? using online resources?), and when you revised
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From your lists, format a readable and clear
chart for me.
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Write a paragraph explaining how well you
think you revised each paper, what your best work is and why, and what
was most help in your writing and revision process. Assess yourself
as a writer-- where do you think you are and what do you still have left
to do.
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Tell me what grade level you think your final
project is at and why.
Example:
Writing Log # 10 Date Writing Progress/Revision
Summary
|
Paper
|
Writing issues
|
Revision/writing work
|
Revised
|
Summary paper
Summary/ revised paper |
s/v/o logic
purpose/thesis statement
wordy sentences |
9.15 conference Dr. Amy -- helped
9.15 conference Dr. Amy -- helped
9.27 writing center -- helped |
9.24
9.29 Final paper |
| Group Language/world |
list writing issues |
dates worked on/how/help or not |
when revised |
| Film Review |
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| Final Project |
just as for the other papers, define the
writing issues that you worked on-- |
when, where, and how your worked on these--
and what strategies helped you |
and when you had your final paper read
to include in your revision notebook |
Paragraph expaling how well you rvised each
paper, best work and why, what strategies you learned most from, final
project assessment
What grade level do you think your final
project is
at?