| Dr.
Lori E. Amy
Department of Writing and Linguistics Georgia Southern University |
P.O. Box 8026
Statesboro, GA 30460 (912) 681-0625/fax (912) 681-0739 |
| Sections:
1101F T/R 3:30 - 4:45 Newton 1106 1101G T/R 6:30 - 7:45 Newton 1106 |
What I Expect From You:
| wk 1 | 8.22-- Review syllabus, distribute first reading
handout
Assign: Blair Handbook pp. 10-25, Critical reading Assign: Nancy Lord's "Native Tongues" (handout) 8.24-- Discuss: Nancy Lord's "Native Tongues" (handout) Apply Skills: close reading, note-taking, outlining Assign: summary of "Native Tongues" In-class: Writing Log #1: Sum up class discussion of thesis and relationship between language and environment |
| wk 2 | 8.29-- Join
Discussion List
Summary draft due; Workshop: Writing Log #2: necessary information, main and subordinate point, order of information Distribute Joke Handout 8.31-- Writing Workshop: Paraphrasing, paragraphing, Thesis Statement-- [You can also get the Blair handbook online at http://www.prenhall.com/fulwiler; to do this, you need the password & user ID from the insert that came from your Blair book] Peer Review |
| wk 3 | 9.4 -- Labor Day
9.5-- Summary due Discuss: Joke handout: language/world relation, satire Work-up: Group Language Analysis 9.7-- Assign:1-2 page paper analyzing what a group's terms say about how that group sees the world. Workshop: Brainstorm language/world relation-- analyze your identity groups and their language. This can be the language of home, school, clubs, generational, work, or activity-oriented groups.. Identify slang, hip, cool terms-- lingo that defines a group identity. Writing log #3 Writing log #4 (weekend assignment) |
| wk 4 | 9.12--
Workshop:
From notes about group language/world relation, develop a Thesis
(what words mean, overall conclusion you can come to about the group and
how their words represent their world)
9.14-- Discussion list rules-- how to be civil while still telling the truth and having your voice heard-- class evolves rules Workshop: Review of Summary paper-- higher and lower order concerns, revision strategies Assign: Revision Notebook Exercises: Keep ongoing for every paper throughout semester; this tracks your progress as a writer and will be the basis for your final exam |
| wk 5 | 9.19 & 9.21--
Drafts for Group language/world analysis due-- writing center conferences,
peer groups for revision, and email & conferences with me
Dorian's paper Writing Log #5 |
| wk 6 | 9.26-- Essay 2 due this week(Language/world)
Assign: Film Review -- See http://www2.gasou.edu/facstaff/lamy/filmrev.html & http://www2.gasou.edu/facstaff/lamy/pap3tip.html You are required to watch at least one of these films: Stigmata, Rosewood, Matrix for 1101F; Matrix, Varsity Blues, Any Given Sunday for 1101G). We'll be discussing these in class and, through our discussion, modeling strategies for interpreting and analyzing films. You may write about a film of your choice, but if you choose a film that we did not agree list in class, then you must pre--approve your choice with me. Be sure to see your film with somebody; use the class discussion list to find out who is writing about what films, to arrange times to get together and watch your film, and to discuss important points in your film. Clearly, you want somebody who is writing about or who has at least seen your film to do your peer review. You may choose to do this assignment as a group project. 9.28-- No class-- view film |
| wk 7 | 10.3-- Discuss films:
Stigmata, Rosewood, Matrix
Writing Log #6 ---------------------------10.3. -- Drop w/out penalty deadline---------------- 10.5-- Film discussion--MEET WITH GROUPS to continue interpreting/analyzing film; Generate Thesis statement and tentative sketch of points to address in film review Writing Log #7: Thesis statement and outline Remember, Thursday I will be in Memphis, Tennessee giving a talk at the Popular Culture Association on possibilities for cultures working through the traumatic violences we have endured. I trust that you now know where you are going well enough to get along w/out me:) In your groups, you should continue talking about the movies about which you are writing, and help each other to generate a thesis and an outline for your film reviews. If you choose to do a group paper, you need to let me know on Tuesday of next week your topic, group members, and who will write what parts of the paper. Over the weekend, use the thesis/outline you generate with your group to draft a paper; bring the paper draft to class on Tuesday, 10.10 |
| wk 8 | 10.10-- Draft work--
10.12-- Drafts of film review due in class-- Paper Mapping Exercise Note: Writing Log #8 is your paper mapping exercise; you need to print two copies of this -- one to give to the person whose paper you mapped so that s/he can revise from it, an the second to keep in your writing notebook as writing log # 8, to be evaluated at the end of the term with the rest of your writing log exercises. Weekend: -- Draft work-- Peer Review and Revision planning; conferencing w/me and at Writing Center throughout end of next week NOTE:-- you are revising these papers TWO TIMES before you turn them in to me: with your first draft, you have a peer map your paper. Then you revise, and with this revision you have a peer do a peer revision. Then you revise again, and turn your work in to me. In order to evaluate your paper, I must see the first draft, the map, the revision, the peer review, and the final revised paper. --------------------10.13 Homecoming-------------- |
| wk 9 | 10.17- HOC
Writing Workshop (for Language/world revisions)-- Writing
Log #9
Prep for Thursday's LOC Workshop! E-mail to the class list specific sentences/passages from your paper that you want us to workshop in class; I will log onto www.listbot.com, pull up the email archive, and work directly from your sentences on the screen. As soon as we are done workshopping a sentence, I will email the revised version to you. 10.19--LOC Writing Workshop (for Language/world revisions) |
| wk 10 | 10.24-- Assign:
Final Projects-- Final Project Research; Review of Search strategies
Assign: Annotated Bibliography 10.26-- Brainstorming and information gathering-- focusing purpose and developing a writing plan Purdue's Planning and Invention Guidelines I & II Assign: Project Proposal |
| wk 11 | 10.31-- On-going research; group Internet
research and project development (keep ongoing annotated bibliography)
11.2-- Workshop Proposals-- due week 12 Sample Proposal 1 & Sample Proposal 2 --------------10-30 & 31 Regents' Exam---------------- |
| wk 12 |
11.7-- Revision workshop: Film Reviews YOU SHOULD BE CONFERENCING YOUR REVISIONS WITH ME AND AT THE WRITING CENTER FROM NOW THROUGH THE END OF THE TERM!!! Proposals due Sample Film Review I & Sample II 11.9-- Final Project draft work-- arrange peer reviews!!-- Directions for activating your GSU web account, downloading and using the wsftp_le file transfer protocol |
| wk 13 | 11.14-- Documenting Sources and writng the
works cited -- Have ongoing annotated bibliographies w/you in class
11.16-- Website instruction for those doing web projects--- |
| wk 14 | 11.21-- Conferencing, extending research.
Helpful sites: gender
and culture, statistical
databases, university of Michigan's
sociology web
11.23 -- Thanksgiving |
| wk15 | 11.28-- Putting Revision Notebooks together
--Revision notebooks MUST HAVE: all of your draft
work for each paper, the peer review and all subsequent revisions, the
copy of the paper I evaluated (I MUST SEE my written evaluation!!) and
the writing issues checklikst I returned with each of your papers, with
the final clean copy for me to grade on top. Paper clip all work
for each paper together-- so, I want all of the work for the summary
paper, with the paper I am to grade on top, paper clipped. Do the
same for the group language/world paper, and the film review. If
you did a group project for the film review,
you still need all of your draft work for the paper, a copy of the writing
issues checklist that I returned with the paper (you may have to photocopy
this), and a final clean copy of the revised paper on top. If you
are doing a web project for you final project,
print a hard copy of the site and take that to the writing center, conference
with me, or get a peer review-- this will count as your draft work.
YOU MUST HAVE THE EQUIVALENT OF A PEER REVIEW (a conference w/me or at
the writing center can count for this).
Writing Log #10 11.30 Final Editing/lower order concerns for Final Projects Sample projects/websites: Stephanie |
| wk 16 | 12.5-- Final Exam Prep-- Final
exam handout
12.7-- Last questions-- web work, finals, Revision notebook LAST DAY TO ACCEPT REVISION NOTEBOOKS |
| Wednesday,
Dec. 13th |
1101 G Final exam -- 8-10 a.m. in Newton 2211 -- THIS IS IN THE MORNING, FOLKS!! UUUUUGGGGHHHH!!!!! |
| Friday,
Dec. 15th |
1101 F Final Exam11-1 Newton 2214 (upstairs) |
Writing Log #3
This writing log is intended
to help you develop a concrete, specific understanding of the topic for
your second writing assignment: what kinds of languages (verbal and non-verbal)
do the identity groups you belong to (or choose to write about) use and
what does their language use tell us about how they see the world.
The writing assignment is posted online at http://www2.gasou.edu/facstaff/lamy/teaching/1101/grplang.html
Writing Log #3 is the first
two bullet points of this assignment. Label a
sheet of paper with the date 9-7, Writing
Log #3, and free-write to this:
Think about the groups to which you belong. These could be familywe'll continue working with this topic in class on Thursday:)
groups, religious groups, social or political groups. Gender and race can
also function as identity groups, as can ethnicity, nationality, and
geographical regions. For example, "southerners" in the United States
tend to form an identity group that is distinct from "northerners."
Similarly, sports fans that affiliate their identities with particular
teams-- "Gator fans" or "Bulldog" fans, for example-- constitute identity
groups. Free-write a bit about the identity groups to which you belong.
How does your affiliation with these groups shape your thinking, form your
relationships, or direct your use of your time (for example, do you go to
meetings? watch events? Hang out with your group members?)
Writing Log #4
After free-writing about
the identity groups to which you belong and the ways in which your affiliation
with them affects you, jot down some notes about the kinds of things your
group talks about. Include things such as common stories that the
group tells, themes that are common to group discussion, words or terms
that group members use to discuss themselves or others in the world.
For example, southerners might commonly tell stories of "Yankees" that
"can't drive."
Once you have spent some
time free-writing and brainstorming your group identities and the language
of these groups, carefully observe your next interactions with the group.
Add specific comments, terms, stories, or patterns of speaking to your
notes.
Writing Log #5
Review today's workshop paper and decide:
Writing Log #10
Writing Log #10 is your last entry-- remember, the writing logs must
be in your revision notebook with all of the work for this class-- they
are 10% of your grade!
This log is intended to help you organize your revision notebook, to
jump-start your final editing/revision for your final project, and to prepare
you for the final exam. In short, this is what you do:
Example:
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| Summary paper
Summary/ revised paper |
s/v/o logic
purpose/thesis statement wordy sentences |
9.15 conference Dr. Amy -- helped
9.15 conference Dr. Amy -- helped 9.27 writing center -- helped |
9.24
9.29 Final paper |
| Group Language/world | list writing issues | dates worked on/how/help or not | when revised |
| Film Review | " " | " " | " " |
| Final Project | just as for the other papers, define the writing issues that you worked on-- | when, where, and how your worked on these-- and what strategies helped you | and when you had your final paper read to include in your revision notebook |
Paragraph expaling how well you rvised each paper, best work and why,
what strategies you learned most from, final project assessment
What grade level do you think your final project is
at?