Dr. Lori E. Amy 
Department of Writing and Linguistics 
Georgia Southern University
   P.O. Box 8026
Statesboro, GA 30460
        (912) 681-0625/fax (912) 681-0739

Sections:
1101F T/R 3:30 - 4:45 Newton 1106
1101G T/R 6:30 - 7:45 Newton 1106
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Course Description

See The Department of Writing and Linguistics ENG1101 course overview.  In order to meet each of these important requirements, this course emphasizes the relationship between language and world.  The fact that we use language says that we live in a world together, with other people with whom we need to communicate.  Our language attempts to understand and describe the world we live in and the relationships we form in this world.  At its most basic level, exploring the relationship between language and world asks: In its broader sense, exploring the relationship between language and world asks us to think about how the stories we tell ourselves -- stories about who we are, who "others" are, how we should live-- shape our vision of the world, and how these stories might be different than the identity stories other people tell themselves about the world.  What are the ways in which groups with different stories (explanatory or identity narratives) can come into conflict, and what are our possibilities for bridging the gaps between ourselves and others by finding points of commonality in our stories?  In order to fully explore this relation between language and world, we will have to pay careful attention to the forms and structures of language, so our class alternates between discussion of and workshopping with our texts (in this sense, your own writing is an important "text" for this class.)

What I Expect From You:


Writing Assignments
We will be doing a great deal of writing for this class.  Our informal writing, such as class E-mail, postings to the class Forum, and the Writing Workshop Wrap-ups, count as 10% of the course grade.
The bulk of the course grade, 70%, will be determined by the formal writing assignments.  Thus, the grade breakdown is as follows: All formal writing assignments will be revised several times before final grading; they must be submitted at the end of the term, with all  pre-writing and draft work, in your Revision Notebook.  Your revision notebook must contain your ongoing writing log.  This is the place where you keep track of your writing progress. Workshops
You are all intelligent and already know how to use language. This class uses what you already know about your world and using language to work with writing.  We will be exploring how writing allows us to manipulate language, learn from our language, study and think and rethink our language use. As such, revision is a way of life in this class, and our workshops provide the opportunity to revise our writing.  At the end of each workshop you will complete a workshop summary assignment which will count towards your informal writing grade.

Readings/Texts

Syllabus
wk 1 8.22-- Review syllabus, distribute first reading handout
Assign: Blair Handbook pp. 10-25, Critical reading
Assign: Nancy Lord's "Native Tongues" (handout)
8.24-- Discuss: Nancy Lord's "Native Tongues" (handout)
Apply Skills: close reading, note-taking, outlining
Assign: summary of "Native Tongues"
In-class: Writing Log #1: Sum up class discussion of thesis and relationship between language and environment
wk 2 8.29-- Join Discussion List
Summary draft due; Workshop: Writing Log #2: necessary information, main and subordinate point, order of information
Distribute Joke Handout
8.31-- Writing Workshop: Paraphrasing, paragraphing, Thesis Statement-- [You can also get the Blair handbook online at http://www.prenhall.com/fulwiler; to do this, you need the password & user ID from the insert that came from your Blair book] 
Peer Review
wk 3 9.4 -- Labor Day
9.5-- Summary due
        Discuss: Joke handout: language/world relation, satire
Work-up: Group Language Analysis
9.7-- Assign:1-2 page paper analyzing what a group's terms say about how that group sees the world.
Workshop:  Brainstorm language/world relation-- analyze your identity groups and their language.  This can be the language of home, school, clubs, generational, work, or activity-oriented groups..  Identify slang, hip, cool terms-- lingo that defines a group identity. 
Writing log #3
Writing log #4  (weekend assignment)
wk 4 9.12-- Workshop: From notes about group language/world relation, develop a Thesis  (what words mean, overall conclusion you can come to about the group and how their words represent their world)
9.14-- Discussion list rules-- how to be civil while still telling the truth and having your voice heard-- class evolves rules
Workshop: Review of Summary paper-- higher and lower order concerns, revision strategies
Assign: Revision Notebook Exercises:  Keep ongoing for every paper throughout semester; this tracks your progress as a writer and will be the basis for your final exam
wk 5 9.19 & 9.21-- Drafts for Group language/world analysis due-- writing center conferences, peer groups for revision, and email & conferences with me
Dorian's paper
Writing Log #5
wk 6 9.26-- Essay 2 due this week(Language/world)
           Assign: Film Review -- See http://www2.gasou.edu/facstaff/lamy/filmrev.html &
http://www2.gasou.edu/facstaff/lamy/pap3tip.html
You are required to watch at least one of these films: Stigmata, Rosewood, Matrix for 1101F; Matrix, Varsity Blues, Any Given Sunday for 1101G).  We'll be discussing these in class and, through our discussion, modeling strategies for interpreting and analyzing films.  You may write about a film of your choice, but if you choose a film that we did not agree list in class, then you must pre--approve your choice with me.  Be sure to see your film with somebody; use the class discussion list to find out who is writing about what films, to arrange times to get together and watch your film, and to discuss important points in your film. Clearly, you want somebody who is writing about or who has at least seen your film to do your peer review.  You may choose to do this assignment as a group project. 
9.28--  No class-- view film
wk 7 10.3-- Discuss films: Stigmata, Rosewood, Matrix
Writing Log #6
---------------------------10.3. -- Drop w/out penalty deadline----------------
10.5-- Film discussion--MEET WITH GROUPS  to continue interpreting/analyzing film; Generate Thesis statement and tentative sketch of points to address in film review
Writing Log #7: Thesis statement and outline
Remember, Thursday I will be in Memphis, Tennessee giving a talk at the Popular Culture Association on possibilities for cultures working through the traumatic violences we have endured.  I trust that you now know where you are going well enough to get along w/out me:)  In your groups, you should continue talking about the movies about which you are writing, and help each other to generate a thesis and an outline for your film reviews.  If you choose to do a group paper, you need to let me know on Tuesday of next week your topic, group members, and who will write what parts of the paper.
Over the weekend, use the thesis/outline you generate with your group to draft a paper; bring the paper draft to class on Tuesday, 10.10
wk 8 10.10-- Draft work-- 
10.12-- Drafts of film review due in class-- Paper Mapping Exercise  Note: Writing Log #8 is your paper mapping exercise; you need to print two copies of this -- one to give to the person whose paper you mapped so that s/he can revise from it, an the second to keep in  your writing notebook as writing log # 8, to be evaluated at the end of the term with the rest of your writing log exercises.
Weekend: -- Draft work-- Peer Review and Revision planning; conferencing w/me and at Writing Center throughout end of next week
NOTE:-- you are revising these papers TWO TIMES before you turn them in to me: with your first draft, you have a peer map your paper.  Then you revise, and with this revision you have a peer do a peer revision.  Then you revise again, and turn your work in to me.  In order to evaluate your paper, I must see the first draft, the map, the revision, the peer review, and the final revised paper.
--------------------10.13 Homecoming--------------
wk 9 10.17-  HOC Writing Workshop (for Language/world revisions)-- Writing Log #9
Prep for Thursday's LOC Workshop! E-mail to the class list specific sentences/passages from your paper that you want us to workshop in class; I will log onto www.listbot.com, pull up the email archive, and work directly from your sentences on the screen.  As soon as we are done workshopping a sentence, I will email the revised version to you.
10.19--LOC Writing Workshop (for Language/world revisions) 
wk 10 10.24-- Assign:  Final Projects-- Final Project Research; Review of Search strategies
Assign: Annotated Bibliography
10.26-- Brainstorming and information gathering-- focusing purpose and developing a writing plan
Purdue's Planning and Invention Guidelines I  &  II
Assign: Project Proposal
wk 11 10.31-- On-going research; group Internet research and project development (keep ongoing annotated bibliography)
11.2-- Workshop Proposals-- due week 12
Sample Proposal 1 & Sample Proposal 2
--------------10-30 & 31 Regents' Exam----------------
wk 12
11.7-- Revision workshop: Film Reviews
YOU SHOULD BE CONFERENCING YOUR REVISIONS WITH ME AND AT THE WRITING CENTER FROM NOW THROUGH THE END OF THE TERM!!!
Proposals due
Sample Film Review I & Sample II
11.9-- Final Project draft work-- arrange peer reviews!!--
Directions for activating your GSU web account, downloading and using the wsftp_le file transfer protocol
wk 13 11.14-- Documenting Sources and writng the works cited -- Have ongoing annotated bibliographies w/you in class
11.16-- Website instruction for those doing web projects---
wk 14 11.21-- Conferencing, extending research.  Helpful sites: gender and culture, statistical databases, university of Michigan's sociology web
11.23 -- Thanksgiving
wk15 11.28-- Putting Revision Notebooks together --Revision notebooks MUST HAVE: all of your draft work for each paper, the peer review and all subsequent revisions, the copy of the paper I evaluated (I MUST SEE my written evaluation!!) and the writing issues checklikst I returned with each of your papers, with the final clean copy for me to grade on top.  Paper clip all work for each paper together--  so, I want all of the work for the summary paper, with the paper I am to grade on top, paper clipped.  Do the same for the group language/world paper, and the film review.  If you did a group project for the film review, you still need all of your draft work for the paper, a copy of the writing issues checklist that I returned with the paper (you may have to photocopy this), and a final clean copy of the revised paper on top.  If you are doing a web project for you final project, print a hard copy of the site and take that to the writing center, conference with me, or get a peer review-- this will count as your draft work.  YOU MUST HAVE THE EQUIVALENT OF A PEER REVIEW (a conference w/me or at the writing center can count for this).
Writing Log #10
11.30 Final Editing/lower order concerns for Final Projects
Sample projects/websites: Stephanie
wk 16 12.5-- Final Exam Prep-- Final exam handout
12.7-- Last questions-- web work, finals, Revision notebook
LAST DAY TO ACCEPT REVISION NOTEBOOKS
Wednesday, 
Dec. 13th
1101 G Final exam -- 8-10 a.m. in Newton 2211 -- THIS IS IN THE MORNING, FOLKS!!   UUUUUGGGGHHHH!!!!!
Friday, 
Dec. 15th
1101 F Final Exam11-1 Newton 2214 (upstairs)

Writing Log #3
    This writing log is intended to help you develop a concrete, specific understanding of the topic for your second writing assignment: what kinds of languages (verbal and non-verbal) do the identity groups you belong to (or choose to write about) use and what does their language use tell us about how they see the world.  The writing assignment is posted online at http://www2.gasou.edu/facstaff/lamy/teaching/1101/grplang.html
    Writing Log #3 is the first two bullet points of this assignment.  Label a
sheet of paper with the date 9-7, Writing Log #3, and free-write to this:

Think about the groups to which you belong.  These could be family
groups, religious groups, social or political groups.  Gender and race can
also function as identity groups, as can ethnicity, nationality, and
geographical regions.  For example, "southerners" in the United States
tend to form an identity group that is distinct from "northerners."
Similarly, sports fans that affiliate their identities with particular
teams-- "Gator fans" or "Bulldog" fans, for example-- constitute identity
groups. Free-write a bit about the identity groups to which you belong.
How does your affiliation with these groups shape your thinking, form your
relationships, or direct your use of your time (for example, do you go to
meetings? watch events?  Hang out with your group members?)
we'll continue working with this topic in class on Thursday:)

Writing Log #4
    After free-writing about the identity groups to which you belong and the ways in which your affiliation with them affects you, jot down some notes about the kinds of things your group talks about.  Include things such as common stories that the group tells, themes that are common to group discussion, words or terms that group members use to discuss themselves or others in the world.  For example, southerners might commonly tell stories of "Yankees" that "can't drive."
    Once you have spent some time free-writing and brainstorming your group identities and the language of these groups, carefully observe your next interactions with the group.  Add specific comments, terms, stories, or patterns of speaking to your notes.

Writing Log #5
Review today's workshop paper and decide:

  1. Does this paper have good points but need more proof (concrete detail)?  Good detail but needs to draw more conclusions?
  2. What is the thesis?  Does is specifically define what the paper will be talking about?  Can we improve the thesis in any way?
  3. Organization: The thesis paragraph needs to lay out the major points the paper will make, and the paper needs to make those points in the order in which they are described in the thesis paragraph.  Each paragraph needs a good topic sentence that specifically defines the thesis point the paragraph is explaining, and every sentence in the paragraph needs to directly develop the topic sentence
Writing Log #9
1) Carefully read my comments on your language/world analysis papers
2) Reread your paper, and re-reading my comments as you go;
3) Summarize my commentary, and discuss those points that you think might be helpful to your revision as well as those points that you may not agree with me about or that you do not think you want to focus your revision energy on;
4) Explain how, after this exercise, you might revise your paper.

Writing Log #10
Writing Log #10 is your last entry-- remember, the writing logs must be in your revision notebook with all of the work for this class-- they are 10% of your grade!
This log is intended to help you organize your revision notebook, to jump-start your final editing/revision for your final project, and to prepare you for the final exam.  In short, this is what you do:

  1. Review each of the writing assignments we have done for this class.  Make sure you have all of your paperwork together.  Beginning with the summary paper and working all the way through the final project, review your first drafts, the comments from you peer review, my critique on the paper you submitted for my evaluation, my notes on the writing issues check list I returned with your paper.  Make a list of each of the writing issues identified for your paper, when and how your worked on the issue, what you learned (i.e., what actually helped you understand the writing problem... a conference? reviewing your handbook?  using online resources?), and when you revised
  2. From your lists, format a readable and clear chart for me.
  3. Write a paragraph explaining how well you think you revised each paper, what your best work is and why, and what was most help in your writing and revision process.  Assess yourself as a writer-- where do you think you are and what do you still have left to do.
  4. Tell me what grade level you think your final project is at and why.


Example:

      Writing Log # 10 Date Writing Progress/Revision Summary
Paper
Writing issues
Revision/writing work
Revised
Summary paper
 
 

Summary/ revised paper

s/v/o logic
purpose/thesis statement
 

wordy sentences

9.15 conference Dr. Amy -- helped
9.15 conference Dr. Amy -- helped
 

9.27 writing center -- helped

9.24
 
 

9.29 Final paper

Group Language/world  list writing issues dates worked on/how/help or not when revised
Film Review "   "  "          " "         "
Final Project just as for the other papers, define the writing issues that you worked on-- when, where, and how your worked on these-- and what strategies helped you and when you had your final paper read to include in your revision notebook

Paragraph expaling how well you rvised each paper, best work and why, what strategies you learned most from, final project assessment
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

What grade level do you think your final project is
at?